Final Film

Audience Feedback

In one of our media lessons we had the class watch our rough cut.
Overall they felt the film was really good, but like all rough cuts it had its problems, despite this the class overall gave it a level 3.

Some of the problems that the class noticed:
- Our title music was too loud
- Our titles music should be looked at again, as they felt it didn't quite fit in with the movie
- Our titles were plain and boring and looked very simple, it was suggested to use bloody titles to fit in with our consistent theme and the name of the film
- One of our actors that plays Kerri moves her eyes during the point of view shot which to our audience suggested bad editing
- After the point of view shot it was suggest to put in a noise on the fade to make it obvious that Imogene had been killed.
- Whilst the actors are talking there is too much "white noise" which really makes the film look like bad quality
- When the book is being used there is once again too much "white noise"
- It was suggested to remove the end titles because it made it look like the end of a film when actually its just the opening

The changes we are going to make are:
- New titles
- Remove the atmosphere noise
- Re-edit Kerri's eye movement
- change the title music
- add a noise after Imogene's murder
- Remove the end titles
- Add an Ident at the beginning of the film
- Turn down the volume on the music and dialogue

Rough Cut

This is our rough cut. After finishing this we had the class watch it and give us audience feedback.


Changes we had to make was instead of using a tracking shot on our titles using the newspaper clippings we changed it to pictures of the wall fading into each other. The quality of the shot was poor, and we worried that it would give of a bad impression of the film. The wall the clippings were on was too short, therefore a tracking shot would be the wrong type to use.

Preliminary Task

Before starting our main project we had to do a preliminary task. Watching it now our group feels we have learned a lot after making and editing the prelim and doing the research and planning
This is ours:

Shooting Schedule

This is the shooting schedule, this will tell us and the actors, where and when to be, what we need for the particular scene. It will therefore make us more organised.